Ages Withheld

Created On: 9/11/2016 5:47:32 PMAuthor: Pratika Gupta

Ages ago the soul was born on free land,
No need, No greed ..
In the land of Spirituality
Darkness never prevailed,
Preaching was the only food,
No place for lessons and results
Sacrifice was what gave power.
Lord took the form of Buddha,
Mahavira, Ram, Christ, Prophet Mohammed.


In recent ages, soul's recantation begins.
Weariness and dullness invigorates the faded glory.
Darkness insists.
Now rules prevail to control
Greed, Desires, Disobedience, Vulgarity.
Salvation dies.. Female birth destroyed
Genesis of murder, evil, plundering, betrayal, hypnosis.
Nature turns down to destruction.
Breathing ceases, wants increase.


We plead guilty, to God..
Endearment presented through Meditations,
Stones that were till now god-like metaphors,
Misconceived for
purifying soul, has now turned off
totally.


Now a new form arises.
Underworld becomes His womb.
Land cracks and He comes out
Holding lotus in one hand,
Potter's Wheel in other, calmness in eyes,
smile on lips, soothing touches.
Covered as Nataraj but named as Kalki
Reparation of souls, transmitting to
diverted souls in right direction.
Salvation holds again.


Again the phases start,
in the same way.
Enthusiast Pure souls, Novice again.
Free land, Free body, Free form customs.. !!
And He seems the only Administrator.. !!


comments


Dibyendu Sarkar 9/11/2016 9:10:44 PM

Touched my soul, overwhelmed!! :-)

Rajarshee Gupta 9/11/2016 9:23:11 PM

Powerful imagery and promising view. Beautiful poetry.Touched my heart.

Himabrata Das 9/11/2016 10:06:05 PM

Illusions and imagery...the search for salvation starts with introspection... beautifully penned!!!

Titas Biswas 9/11/2016 11:12:56 PM

Well done!

Aditi Tiwari 9/11/2016 11:25:07 PM

I can not believe my eyes. Simply awesome :*

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It's just amazing... Well done

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Nice

Reshab Shaw 9/12/2016 7:22:40 AM

Creative!!!! good job done.

9/12/2016 5:14:05 PM

so Nice, so

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Promising

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Nice one..?? 9/12/2016 5:47:54 PM

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Superb!! πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Nice oneπŸ‘πŸ‘

CHANDANA 9/12/2016 5:49:40 PM

Very Nice

Swastik Jaiswal 9/12/2016 5:52:08 PM

Good di good.

Naman Gupta 9/12/2016 5:53:15 PM

Well done sis .. πŸ’•πŸ’•

Subhadrika Sen 9/12/2016 6:09:01 PM

Very well written.

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NYC thoughts ...kip it up πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘

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Very nyc...πŸ˜‹

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Beautiful Porm :) Great Job !!

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NiceπŸ˜ƒ

Aritrik Dutta Chowdhury 9/12/2016 6:47:21 PM

Good one.prophetic.

Bipin 9/12/2016 6:55:48 PM

Nice one:)

9/12/2016 7:07:25 PM

Very well written darling :) keep up the hard work

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Good one .....Superb....

Avi Narera 9/12/2016 8:53:54 PM

Very well written. Superb

Anita Jaiswal 9/12/2016 10:11:48 PM

Proud of you!!

Cathy Li Causi 9/12/2016 10:29:55 PM

I love it, so beautiful!

rahul verma 9/12/2016 10:30:02 PM

nyc one

Ashmita Mukherjee 9/13/2016 12:12:56 AM

Very well written, keep up the good work. Soulful verse.

Anand Sharma 9/13/2016 11:20:39 AM

Very well written ,keep it up. Soulful verse.

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Great work :) Keep it up :)

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Great work :) Keep it up :)

Chayanika De 9/13/2016 6:54:54 PM

Good job... Expecting more ;)

Reshma Jaiswal 9/13/2016 6:57:19 PM

It's really nice welldone

9/13/2016 6:58:24 PM

Good job !! Keep it up !! πŸ‘πŸ‘

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its really a nic 1... Creative...

ManMohan Agarwal 9/13/2016 7:05:58 PM

Amazing one :) (y)

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Divyanshu Jaiswal D. J. 9/13/2016 7:16:40 PM

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Ivnil 9/13/2016 10:01:44 PM

Wow

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Nice one. :)

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Heart touching poem with very nice thoughts

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Kirti Daga 9/13/2016 10:33:49 PM

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Really very nice

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Chirag agarwal 9/13/2016 10:59:37 PM

Great work!! Keep going!

Diksha Gupta 9/13/2016 11:05:48 PM

Really good!! Keep up the good work!

Vardaan Jaiswal 9/14/2016 12:24:40 AM

Nice one! ;)

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Overwhelming .! Beautiful lines

Ankit 9/14/2016 7:00:14 PM

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highly appreciable :).. keep up the work 9/14/2016 11:13:41 PM

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Ravi Giri 9/14/2016 11:39:13 PM

A great story .. too good to comment 😊😊

Rituparna Mullick 9/15/2016 11:27:19 AM

Good one.. Keep it up..

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Awesome :)

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Great work! 😍

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Nice.

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