May be because i was a kid then

Created On: 9/4/2016 11:42:32 AMAuthor: Addhaya Anil

That was a chilled winter night,

When I was asleep and for some reason my family was still awake.

While I was weaving my own dreams, someone's world was shattering,

Breaking into tiny peices.

They were screaming at the top of their voice.

At the tiny age of playing and doing mischief, 10,

I heard something shattering

But that didn't hurt me much,

May be because I was a kid then.

Seeing those broken glass bangles,

That were once the beauty

Of the soft, smooth and curvy wrist of the lady of my house,

I felt something unusual but didn't think much about it. 

May be because I was a kid then.

I witnessed the smudged vermillion from a head that once 

Was adorning beauty.

I didn't understand why was it so,

May be because I was a kid then.

When everyone was crying their heart out,

My eyes didn't shed a single drop, 

I wasn't aware of the facts then,

May be because I was a kid then.

Now that I have grown up,

I understand what happened that day.

My eyes now, shed oceans and I wail

As the heart now realizes that it lost

The lifeline that was letting it beat.

Shining writer

 


comments


Amit 9/5/2016 10:40:45 AM

Touching

Ayush 9/5/2016 10:42:56 AM

Really nice..

Khush 9/5/2016 7:28:58 PM

It's wonderful and well written and emotional

Cifa Rodrigues 9/7/2016 9:26:28 AM

Love it!!

Pragya sankhala 9/7/2016 1:37:16 PM

I knw how hard it is to write what through once but u nailed it

Riya 9/7/2016 1:40:17 PM

Wow..amazing:)

Rhea 9/7/2016 1:54:22 PM

Really touching :)

Diksha 9/7/2016 1:57:19 PM

Touching and beautiful poem expressed emotions at its best

Zeeshan Momin 9/7/2016 1:59:08 PM

Wonderfully penned. The way it started and the way it ended is truly flawless. I think only the shining writer can do this. Keep up the good work.

Manjari 9/7/2016 2:00:19 PM

Beautiful :)

Manjari 9/7/2016 2:00:26 PM

Beautiful :)

Suvasri 9/7/2016 2:01:01 PM

So heart touching....facts r so painful...

santi rai 9/7/2016 2:02:16 PM

WOWโ™ก

Shilpa Goel 9/7/2016 2:05:57 PM

Heart-touching โค๏ธ So proud of you girl!!

_evolutionist_ 9/7/2016 2:06:21 PM

Beautiful. Keep writing

Kavita 9/7/2016 2:08:52 PM

Great ink. Keep flowing.

SCAS. 9/7/2016 2:18:11 PM

Amazing dude ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜

Suhasini Mishra 9/7/2016 2:28:49 PM

waooo... heart touchng nd itzzz amzingggg

Sobia Moon 9/7/2016 3:15:40 PM

You've written it Marvelously!!You are indeed a very talented writer and the depth of your words never ceases to inspire. Keep Shining!

Sanjana 9/7/2016 3:16:04 PM

Beautifulโ™ฅ

Deepali 9/7/2016 4:13:21 PM

Beautifulllll

Jayant 9/7/2016 4:14:26 PM

nice one man.

ruby 9/7/2016 4:51:36 PM

bahut sundar

meet_the_wizard 9/7/2016 4:54:51 PM

Mesmerising

El Tio 9/7/2016 5:19:18 PM

Amazing! Love it! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’˜

Himanshu 9/7/2016 5:32:00 PM

It was such a nice and anticipating write up. :)

Rupali 9/7/2016 6:57:56 PM

Damn!

Pratibha Aasat 9/7/2016 7:36:24 PM

Amazing dear

Osheen 9/7/2016 7:50:13 PM

I loved the way it traces the psychology of a young child, the innocence that the child possesses. :) Such a common thought but such a lovely expression. Keep writing baby :*

Arunika Anil 9/7/2016 9:24:40 PM

Amazing dear sis, keep writing like this. :-)

Anurag 9/7/2016 9:56:09 PM

Wow! Aashi, Beautifully expressed. So i see u've been doing better and better these days. This was one heart touching poem nicely penned and expressed. Keep it up :-)

Thelostlover11 9/7/2016 9:58:24 PM

Lovely aashi ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

soulsfrombeyond 9/7/2016 10:15:49 PM

Superb....

Romika Rai 9/7/2016 10:34:21 PM

Wow, very beautifully expressed. Proud to be your bestie :-)

Rammi Keshri 9/8/2016 8:52:21 AM

Spellbound I'm. it's beautiful yaar. You are too good. Keep writing like this

Gautam Kumar Singh 9/8/2016 12:02:28 PM

very beautifully penned.keep writing like this....

Aditya Raj 9/8/2016 12:18:26 PM

very beautifull

Avika Anil 9/8/2016 3:56:31 PM

Wow sissy, it's amazing love. Keep writing and shining like this

Anushka 9/8/2016 4:24:20 PM

Wow Addhaya, It's very deep yaar.

shivani gupta 9/8/2016 4:25:31 PM

its amazing .......u have written so good ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

mudit 9/9/2016 8:31:36 AM

Beautifully written

Prity Rai 9/9/2016 8:23:53 PM

It's beautiful, sis

Anjali 9/11/2016 7:50:52 AM

Lovely poem dear

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