Stupendous Love Turning Eternal

Created On: 9/3/2016 6:49:38 PMAuthor: Kartik Jha

First time I saw you
Asked myself, is that you,
We carry same traits
Just like two soul mates skates

Formed by different conversion
But are actually one's lateral inversion,
Few things in us were distinct
But will fall in love was my instinct

Your eyes sparkle like the stars in the sky
When I stare into them I feel like I am soaring high,
Your lips so soft and red
Thought of kissing you is always stuck in my head

Your beauty so bright and warm
Shinning through darkest storm,
Adoring you is my greatest delight
Your tenderness is my love light

You are the one I can't live without
This fact is true I have no doubt,
I love the way u smile at me
I love the way together we are free

When u laugh at my jokes I feel tall
When u look at me with those lovely eyes,
I feel I can break any wall
But only when I am in your love hall

I am your armor to protect you from harm
Just like you are my lucky charm,
May we always feel each other's glow
Just like your activities make my mind blow

A special place for you and me
An undying bond to guide us free,
Loneliness blocking the way
Our love lighting the way

Every mile I walk
Every word I talk
Every breath I take
It is only to make you smile without a break

We fight very much
But love keeps us in touch,
Two souls who can't sit together
Now wish to leave world altogether

Love is not something you find
Love is something that finds you,
Being so much passionate and devoting
Can't even blame gravity for falling in love with you

Don't throw me out ever
Stay in my heart forever,
You are the reason I breathe
May our love immensely breeze

Words can't describe emotions I feel inside
For you may be it's out of sight,
Want you to always stay beside
Together will form a paradise

Had a rollercoaster ride till now
We saw many ups and downs,
Survived each other I don't know how
Just want our journey never frown

You know I can write endless
Just like my love is boundless,
But still want to write more in the last stanza
Ok done! all I want is to be your happiness Santa


Mridul Mandhan 9/4/2016 1:18:13 AM

I got spellbound. <3

Lakshay 9/4/2016 8:20:49 AM

U nailed it brooπŸ˜„πŸ˜˜

Kanishk 9/4/2016 10:37:19 AM

Superb (y)

Ananya 9/4/2016 10:56:32 AM

Loved it...πŸ˜ƒ

Ramnit 9/4/2016 11:01:02 AM

Bhaisab chaa gye ap to❀

Gaurav 9/4/2016 11:01:16 AM


Shashank 9/4/2016 11:04:24 AM

Hats offπŸ˜‰

Rupav Jain 9/4/2016 11:15:06 AM

Inspiration to write a poem... just WoW

9/4/2016 11:22:58 AM

grt work bro ...

9/4/2016 11:23:55 AM

grt work bro ...

bow down! ??#amazing 9/4/2016 11:34:41 AM

bow down! ??#amazing

tanvi 9/4/2016 11:35:49 AM

bow down!πŸ˜‰ #amazing

Shweta 9/4/2016 11:36:53 AM

Awesome ,superb

Neha 9/4/2016 11:55:19 AM

Brilliant.. I just love it πŸ’—

Shivam 9/4/2016 12:05:41 PM


Vandit 9/4/2016 12:15:58 PM


Yasar ali 9/4/2016 12:35:33 PM


Srishty Rawat 9/4/2016 12:42:33 PM

Your thoughts....Your words #amazing #hats_offπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ gemin

srishty rawat 9/4/2016 12:44:41 PM


The Real Nigga 9/4/2016 12:57:21 PM

I am here because my Homie wrote this dope ass poem, Nigga wanna be a poet Dawg! So we homies gonna support his romantic ass before another Flash's daughter fucks him up. Kartik Peace Out Homie!You is the next John Keats

Shubham 9/4/2016 1:03:37 PM


Mohit 9/4/2016 1:13:51 PM

I sent it to my gf ,she is marrying meπŸ˜‚

Mayurshikha 9/4/2016 2:26:12 PM

Awesomely written .. Seems like you have poured your heart out through the poem .😊😊😊..keep it up πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

Ollie 9/4/2016 6:25:26 PM

Amazing..😍😍 The way you pour your heart out in writing,, damn.. any girl would be lucky to have you..

Harshit Maheshwari 9/4/2016 6:57:00 PM

awesome yr :)

Shubham 9/4/2016 7:33:13 PM


Swaroop 9/4/2016 7:42:30 PM

Nice flow of poetry..great work

vrinda 9/4/2016 10:36:33 PM

Wowwwww!!!.....jaw dropped ...excellent man!!πŸ‘πŸ‘..ATB

Aarushi 9/4/2016 10:51:16 PM

Beautiful :)

9/5/2016 11:02:22 PM

So much love in this poem, fantabulous

Amartya 9/6/2016 11:01:06 PM

Fantastic bro ...loved it

Cifa Rodrigues 9/7/2016 9:21:16 AM


Avani 9/10/2016 2:20:51 AM


Gracia 9/10/2016 2:21:24 AM


Sarthak 9/10/2016 2:21:40 AM


prince 9/10/2016 2:25:27 AM


Raunak 9/10/2016 9:10:57 AM

Awsm lines......

Roy 9/10/2016 9:12:14 AM

Love is like a pole star...πŸ’—

Farha 9/10/2016 9:14:23 AM

Well written

Deepak Kumar Singh 9/10/2016 9:21:17 AM

Aww omg too cute... i really loved it, it was written so nicely, i could completely picture it all. very nicely written, as always! 5/5 .......

Tanya 9/10/2016 9:30:37 AM

Gud job man!!!

Niharika Thakur 9/10/2016 10:26:22 AM

Impressive...nice work dude!

Saket 9/10/2016 11:26:50 PM


Saket 9/10/2016 11:28:21 PM

good one bro,keep writing

Lisha 10/1/2016 2:43:01 PM

Impeccable ! <3

Good work.. :D 10/11/2016 12:43:43 AM

Good work.. :D

pankhuri 10/11/2016 12:45:02 AM

Awesome! ;)

Apoorva 7/22/2017 12:20:54 AM

O wow! Heart touching :) mate? You're damn talented (y)

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