The 456 Steps

Created On: 9/1/2016 7:04:33 PMAuthor: Bishaldeep Kakati

The lofty feretory,
Had that hidden allegory.
Ah! Near the chandlery,
The devotees' bowed,
Their noggins'
In the name of spirituality.

The gargantuan congregation,
Storming from
Different parts of the nation.
Oh! To seek from the saint,
Those virtuous lessons,
And to expunge away,
All their torments and tensions.
The relics of the saint,
Designed in the monadnock.
As to gain there
456 steps got crafted
In the rocks.
The aroma of the incense sticks,
The holy chants
Scrawled in the bricks
Ah! Even the octogenarian,
Hobbled up,
With her sticks.
The soul rendering
Holy songs by the buskers',
Drive away
All the flusters.
As in the ambience
Of the feretory,
Lies the elucidation
Of spirituality.


comments


Jenisha 9/1/2016 7:25:00 PM

Beautiful.

Suman Talukdar 9/1/2016 7:33:40 PM

wonderful

Vivek Barman 9/1/2016 7:37:43 PM

Marvellous

Sanchali 9/1/2016 7:49:18 PM

Awesome

Mousumee 9/1/2016 7:57:46 PM

Superb

Kishalay 9/1/2016 8:09:43 PM

Always a pleasure to read your poems !! Another gem of a piece !!

Namrata 9/1/2016 8:12:00 PM

Such a nice and pure one.

Sanhita Acharjee 9/1/2016 8:14:15 PM

Beautifully presented and perfect one.

Barsha Saikia 9/1/2016 8:14:47 PM

Clever and touching creation.

Priyangkush 9/1/2016 8:15:23 PM

Keep up the good work man.

chengish 9/1/2016 8:28:21 PM

সুন্দৰ

Dipshy 9/1/2016 8:33:31 PM

Nice one👌

smriti gogoi 9/1/2016 8:51:59 PM

moojaaa ....keep it up (y)

SMITA BhOWMick 9/1/2016 9:11:01 PM

Nyc.. jst awsm☺

Rimzim 9/1/2016 9:19:27 PM

Fabulous

Subham 9/1/2016 9:37:49 PM

Awesome

superb bro.. keep doing the good work 9/1/2016 9:42:58 PM

superb bro.. keep doing the good work

superb bro.. keep doing the good work 9/1/2016 9:43:01 PM

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superb bro.. keep doing the good work 9/1/2016 9:43:55 PM

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superb bro.. keep doing the good work 9/1/2016 9:44:02 PM

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superb bro.. keep doing the good work 9/1/2016 9:44:02 PM

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Bismrita 9/1/2016 9:44:19 PM

Superb bro..keep doing the good work..

Manas 9/1/2016 9:53:52 PM

Great piece of poem, Bishal :) KUDOS!!

Diksha 9/1/2016 9:57:28 PM

Indeed a great one. True lines described.

Richa 9/1/2016 10:03:36 PM

Bish.. :) so proud of you...keep it up buddy

arih 9/1/2016 10:08:22 PM

superb man 👌

Mukta 9/1/2016 10:16:38 PM

Great work as always!

Beautiful work 9/1/2016 10:32:39 PM

Beautiful work

Himashree 9/1/2016 10:33:32 PM

Beautiful work

Anindita 9/1/2016 11:37:59 PM

Really beautiful.

Dubari 9/1/2016 11:57:32 PM

Posh writing skills.

Alvina 9/2/2016 1:41:29 AM

Thoughtful and well presented as always.

Alvina 9/2/2016 1:41:48 AM

Thoughtful and well presented as always.

Nihal 9/2/2016 6:09:04 AM

Boriha 😍

Chayanika 9/2/2016 9:22:16 AM

nice job. Choice of words is commendable. keep up with the good work

Bindu mani Tamuli 9/2/2016 10:21:46 AM

Nice.. Agowai jua👍

Nilmi Konwar 9/2/2016 2:33:16 PM

loved it.. keep up the Good work!! @ Bishaldeep

Nilmi Konwar 9/2/2016 2:34:17 PM

loved it.. keep up the Good work!! @ Bishaldeep

Tania 9/2/2016 11:07:27 PM

Amazing ...keep it up!

Aquida 11/24/2017 3:04:00 AM

Lovely Bishal :)

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